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Wow. This was great. No, extremely amazing. It was totally great. I just have a small nit-pick. Your ehh, phrasing. Everything falls into line except the way you put the ...

good,bye By Kisba Did you run away? Like the wind, for the hills as they say... (I like the beginning, it's poetic and to the point.) 'Cause when you win, ...

This was sweet and definately to the point. I loved it =] Your first two lines were the most powerful...maybe you should make the last lines powerful too? They are ...

Can’t Take the Pain I liked you , I though you joined my friend crew . But you listened to your other friends , My heart bends! It hurts in ...

the day i didn't wake up, to kiss father goodbye >>> The day I didn't wake up, to kiss father goodbye.> He put on his boots and went to work. ...

Aww! That was so sad. Wonderfully written, but horribly sad! :smt045 That's a good thing, though. You made me feel sad! So you have fulfilled your job as a writer. ...

Wow. Intersting. Comapring snow to mud. I like that imaginary. I also like how as you read on, the words got angrier, and you got more power out of everything. ...

That was quite entertaining to read. You have a very colorful imagination! I like it. The....poem...not your colorful imagination! I liked the rhythem a lot. Really. it was one of ...

Awesome. It was really quite strong for a song.(That rhymed! :smt041 ) Your chorus was beautiful. Actually, your entire song was beautiful. *Gold star* Anyways, I will end this rant ...

Ooh, I liked it. I really liked this part.... Be yourself! Be yourself! Be yourself! You lying sucker Be yourself! Be yourself! Be yourself! You mother… fucker! lol. I don't ...

I stared at your window across the street and thought , Do you love me? After a long time I came to a conclusion. You wouldn't have forced all those ...

Okay, this was interesting. I'm not quite sure I understand it yet, so I'll try my best to review. #1. Your description was awesome. I think that I want to ...

It was a pretty restaurant. We had picked a back table in a nook, further away from the talking and people, and where the candle was almost brighter than the ...

Wow. A strange twist in your story. 8) I'm hooked already! :D I saw no grammar mistakes, but that doesn't mean anything.... :lol: Anyways, nice story. I'm looking forwards to ...

Okay, well, wow. That was very interesting. Your character development is coming along quite nicely. I can understand each of them already, so good job on that. You plot is ...